17.01.2009
Category "Emoções" (Poems em inglês)
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Jutta Knubel

Frozen

Frozen my heart, black my soul.
Frozen my body, to live is my goal.

Frozen my dreams, grey is my sample board.
Frozen my wishes, feel absolute short.

Frozen my hope, frozen my confidence, all in.
Icecold my hands, no more chances to win.

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Published on e-Stories.org on 17.01.2009.

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Liebe Jutta,

frozen,frozen,frozen...ein gleichmäßiger...aber sehr kalter Takt...damit kann man(n) die Worte fühlen...

Liebe Nachtgrüße
Faro

hansl18.01.2009

Ich meine liebe Jutta wünsche Dir heute nur eines, ganz viel Wärme in Deine Seele!!!
Franz

FranzB18.01.2009

Much more optimism, dear Jutta! Generally OK, one little change, I think, would be better. Instead of "absolute" I would like to write "absolutely". Regards from RT.

rainer18.01.2009

Doch doch,liebe Jutta
auch du wirst gewinnen,
irgendwann ganz bestimmt.
Ich drück dich.maria

maza18.01.2009

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