When a momentHas a meaning,Electrifying the atmosphereRather impressive in itsExtension,
Life shows its pleasures.In some wayFor the young and oldEven if they can't see it.
Breathe inEternity.Give it a try.Increase your radiance,Not your pride.Secretly permitted.
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Wonderful in its melody and meaning is this one of the most moving english poems I ever read of an "amateur" author. Thank you for writing this, no need to critisize it in any way.
So here is where you have been "hiding" your poems, Claudio ;o)
This one is very good regarding the writing and its content.
I like it very much.
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