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„The snowman“ of Karl Wiener

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JoachimB (achimbeykabelbw.de) 10.12.2008Answer
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The story is great. However, I would suggest to correct two mistakes:
standing there mute, without any sign of movement.

Next morning the children were surprised to find their old snowman

Best regards
Joachim Beyer
achimbey@kabelbw.de



Answer by Karl Wiener:
Hi Joachim, thank you for the suggestions, hoping to get more advice concerning others of my stories. Kind regards, Karl (12.12.2008)




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